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Your tone sounds like you got some reverb/delay thing going on? It clouds your intro quite a bit plus you used the neck pup*? It makes it muddy sounding... though....
You might find this weird.
I like the delay/echo/reverb thing going on, its like slapback-ish... It adds flavour and I can imagine playing that intro riff with a tighter tone, it would work out better IMO.
Plus that slapback-ish thing makes it sound even less usual.
Is your lower string out of tune? When you play the intro, some spots sound off.
And DOOD... is that a diminished/harmonic-minor sweep in the chorus?
I like your takes in the "chorus" section. After the totally out there (pun not intended) sweeps... those little licks speak alot IMO.
1st sweep, then nominal blues lick
2nd sweep, then NICE. I like that, whatever it is, it moves me, I just perk up.
3rd sweep, then hahaha... I hear humor! Or maybe desperation?

Since ur take is titled WhackAHWhackAH. :lol: It is very cool, that pause was unexpected and the 2 notes after - I like.
How did you go about this take? You sound quite ... nervous? 1st take?
*3rd listen, while typing this, the intro sounds more like your bridge pup but the tone is loose.