what djanggo said about your playing is true. The style, the sound, the feel.... unfortunately, most parts are out of order. Even the timings are also everywhere. So why dun you take it that you need to improve on this? You should have known that someone will criticise you even if you play like malmsteen. Or perhaps you are actually looking forward to people here telling you the normal 'Good Job', 'Very nice', 'Your playing is awesome' etc etc...
Take it in your stride and learn to listen to others for others to listen to you.
and djanggo, you dun have to criticise ppl playing old school melayu rock. If you're from that era, I'm sure you know how most ppl wanted to be like them one day. So wat's wrong with playing their covers once in a while just to remind us the basics of rock.....
