The second half of an uncompleted song

[MichaelAngelo]

Hi all, this is a grubby demo for the second half of an uncomplete song, please comment, good or bad, but please dont talk about the recording quality, cos is use mp3 player record one...
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http://antiaction.tripod.com/solo.WAV

 

[MichaelAngelo]

sorry, could those who listened please tell me how's the potential? Cos we are planning to use this for a competition. Thank you very much, and sorry for any trouble!

 

[penta-tonic]

haha. its a damn interesting rhythm line or issit the bass im hearing. well i guess anything has potential. all it needs is some heart.

 

[MichaelAngelo]

oh, the rhythm line is the bass. haha, i like my bassist style. i was on lead guitar, and there is a rhythm guitar too. thank you for the comment.