firstly, thanks for ur time.
well, ive nv actually fully written a whole original song by myself. today i decided to do a full song by myself. well, purpose being, for memeroilia and also for my band xenon.
this recording isnt really the final product though, thats jst what i came up with, when i sent the recording to my bandmates, they said to keep it like that and it sounded cool to them. however, i feel contary, i feel that the song lacks something.....
so guys, pls help me out and tell me what u feel is lacking or what u think can be done to make it a better piece. thanks a lot.
ull get a cookie in return for ur kindness.
http://s26.yousendit.com/d.aspx?id=10UCLR3LO5JN414RJS86WSCUVF
pls dont comment on the playing, haha, cos i knw that the playing sucks right nw, bt jst rushed to record a take to pass arnd for comments. the drums came from my drum machine btw.
well, ive nv actually fully written a whole original song by myself. today i decided to do a full song by myself. well, purpose being, for memeroilia and also for my band xenon.
this recording isnt really the final product though, thats jst what i came up with, when i sent the recording to my bandmates, they said to keep it like that and it sounded cool to them. however, i feel contary, i feel that the song lacks something.....
so guys, pls help me out and tell me what u feel is lacking or what u think can be done to make it a better piece. thanks a lot.
ull get a cookie in return for ur kindness.
http://s26.yousendit.com/d.aspx?id=10UCLR3LO5JN414RJS86WSCUVF
pls dont comment on the playing, haha, cos i knw that the playing sucks right nw, bt jst rushed to record a take to pass arnd for comments. the drums came from my drum machine btw.