poetry/lyrics section
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glissceule
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i don't see the "untidy" connotation at all; the text appears to be more of an angered response or rant directed towards the boss. the relationship is pretty apparent: the man in question obviously has power over the speaker, yet there is no impetus for the speaker to approximate the man; it is merely a "call" for acknowledgement. the sexual motifs are not, i suppose, just vulgar profanities being spewed onto the man, but it does seem to facilitate to the reader the speaker's gaze (on the man). by constantly referencing these "private" domains, the speaker is, effectively, undressing the man, unveiling the "real" person behind, or simply, the "truth" (as how it appears to be to the speaker). the text thus appropriates a higher position, one which attempts to represent the truth, and more importantly, one which assumes a position superior to that of the man. this, however, exists merely on an ideological level; it is not, as mentioned before, an approximation of literal power.
OOO YOU'LL BE PUMPING OVALTINE!!!!!
OOO YOU'LL BE PUMPING OVALTINE!!!!!
AgingYouth
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bro glissceule bro, finished exams liao ar? So free eh? Need to pass you some CDs for review. Hurhurhur~
bro emphibian bro, this is part of the project you mentioned about?
Eh, deathism, words are used to describe, communicate and educate. In what way has my bro emphibian bro insulted poetry which is basically just a way which people use words to communicate an idea?
If so, that means to you poetry must follow a certain set of rules, rhyming pattern, meters and all and even certain subject matter? I wonder what would the Beat poets think of that?
Describing genitals in poetry is nothing. 'The Wife of Bath' is taught in 'A'-levels and has very vivid descriptions of sex, sexual organs and adultery in your archaic English. Yes, they teach dirty poems/ literature in school! Woo hoo!!!
bro emphibian bro, this is part of the project you mentioned about?
Eh, deathism, words are used to describe, communicate and educate. In what way has my bro emphibian bro insulted poetry which is basically just a way which people use words to communicate an idea?
If so, that means to you poetry must follow a certain set of rules, rhyming pattern, meters and all and even certain subject matter? I wonder what would the Beat poets think of that?
Describing genitals in poetry is nothing. 'The Wife of Bath' is taught in 'A'-levels and has very vivid descriptions of sex, sexual organs and adultery in your archaic English. Yes, they teach dirty poems/ literature in school! Woo hoo!!!
glissceule
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obviously the archaic english is meant as a system of honorifics. it is meant to connote a sense of respect from speaker to addressee. but of course, this is juxtaposed against the sexual motifs and general tone of the text; appropriating it with an almost spiteful voice, lending the "thys" and "thees" a sarcastic, vengeful sheen. so i don't see how using archaic english is "insulting poetry".
m m m m mm m m mm m mm mm midnight!
m m m m mm m m mm m mm mm midnight!
PatheinRaindropMoe
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woahh lauuu ehhh, why bros bros here so cheeem one. Dont understand whats speaking on. Lets take it easy and see it simply.
i, you, for, but, so, it must
then, why, with, hear, shall we
if, i, got, to love, feel
can, we, move, there, heal
one, 2, two, 1, left, up
right, down, 1, four, 4, 1
every, avery, ovary, literary
but then, if must, why shall we
dal segno sign here: more than 0, less than 1
speak not listen but listen not touch
wasting as much like stream to river
then to sea, flow like cum and hum like single coil
but if to raise it beyond the sight of hearing
we are no more but more than 0
thus, becasue, so, although,
who what where when why
i repeat, more then 0, less than 1
DS al coda
i, you, for, but, so, it must
then, why, with, hear, shall we
if, i, got, to love, feel
can, we, move, there, heal
one, 2, two, 1, left, up
right, down, 1, four, 4, 1
every, avery, ovary, literary
but then, if must, why shall we
dal segno sign here: more than 0, less than 1
speak not listen but listen not touch
wasting as much like stream to river
then to sea, flow like cum and hum like single coil
but if to raise it beyond the sight of hearing
we are no more but more than 0
thus, becasue, so, although,
who what where when why
i repeat, more then 0, less than 1
DS al coda
glissceule
New member
to continue avonrellet's masterpiece:
move then connie!
let me go yay!
cause it's a yardless day
congo line too good day!
salad is a cargo you could do
Chet's my buddy, Chester Rowe!
called him at the coaster room
smashing all the people up
it's a child no parka rule
OOOOOO laddie, ready, bite your knee!
OOOOOO conk a Collie, conquer he!
deal them, peel them, people looked shocked
move, too, then you got private shower!
move then connie!
let me go yay!
cause it's a yardless day
congo line too good day!
salad is a cargo you could do
Chet's my buddy, Chester Rowe!
called him at the coaster room
smashing all the people up
it's a child no parka rule
OOOOOO laddie, ready, bite your knee!
OOOOOO conk a Collie, conquer he!
deal them, peel them, people looked shocked
move, too, then you got private shower!
PatheinRaindropMoe
New member
oh bro Emphi bro, i like to cum for you in peace. Nor have i angry to make of you. Its all of everyday love. Peace i came to make friend
As such, i have another piece which i like to share with you and to have you collaborate with me in this, i start first,
A, as in the letter "A"
a friend to me like beginning of this
i open up to share with you
this brief encounter of moment
to, and so on, i like to
see, and with you, to work this
out, it came in two of each
but one it will, to be it all
"12/8 signature bit crushing time"
"feed thru ringmod to further analyse"
"sound"
"words"
fill in here till the end onwards
rove, like love
broPRMbro
As such, i have another piece which i like to share with you and to have you collaborate with me in this, i start first,
A, as in the letter "A"
a friend to me like beginning of this
i open up to share with you
this brief encounter of moment
to, and so on, i like to
see, and with you, to work this
out, it came in two of each
but one it will, to be it all
"12/8 signature bit crushing time"
"feed thru ringmod to further analyse"
"sound"
"words"
fill in here till the end onwards
rove, like love
broPRMbro
piss no whore
bro PRM bro, i am cumming in peace. you did never angry me so it is okays. peace to you to, we can becomings friendship.
here is my collaborate piece with you.
B, as in balls
like basketball volleyball sizes
or tennisballs for others some say
sweet if moulded like ping pong balls.
ya balls, the beaches are
filled with floating balls
big ones small ones
even contemporary arty husky like coconuty
raffles city, mish mash curry puff
country with dreadlock pubic region
puffy puffy twirly curly
by balls the size of our hearts.
*4/72, 67/2, 819/45 and 3/4.67 time signature over nose digging*
*scratch scratch somewhere angrily*
*sample scratch and play to 103/73.56*
*tempo : 57*
much lovely
emp.
bro PRM bro, i am cumming in peace. you did never angry me so it is okays. peace to you to, we can becomings friendship.
here is my collaborate piece with you.
B, as in balls
like basketball volleyball sizes
or tennisballs for others some say
sweet if moulded like ping pong balls.
ya balls, the beaches are
filled with floating balls
big ones small ones
even contemporary arty husky like coconuty
raffles city, mish mash curry puff
country with dreadlock pubic region
puffy puffy twirly curly
by balls the size of our hearts.
*4/72, 67/2, 819/45 and 3/4.67 time signature over nose digging*
*scratch scratch somewhere angrily*
*sample scratch and play to 103/73.56*
*tempo : 57*
much lovely
emp.
AgingYouth
New member
bro emphibian bro, I recognise a joke when I see one lah, bro.
I'd like to dedicate this couplet to all my bro bros and sis sis's in this forum. Stay kewl and funkay always...
"Words are very unnecessary/ They can only do harm"
I'd like to dedicate this couplet to all my bro bros and sis sis's in this forum. Stay kewl and funkay always...
"Words are very unnecessary/ They can only do harm"
PatheinRaindropMoe
New member
brilliant, bro emphi bro, just brilliant! And a first in the thread to have collab.
to quote my hokkien friends from the westcoast, i mean westside
"boh beh zhao, hia ti, wa kio li teh yi mia" aka "no horse run, bro, i call you number 1"
Thank, rove, peace \lml
to quote my hokkien friends from the westcoast, i mean westside
"boh beh zhao, hia ti, wa kio li teh yi mia" aka "no horse run, bro, i call you number 1"
Thank, rove, peace \lml
AgingYouth
New member
C, as in cocks, cunts, cheebyes,
words which in the public eye are deemed as vulgarity.
What makes the scentific terms as penis and vaginas much less offensive?
Is it not in the hearts and minds of people where foul, foul thoughts spring from?
Without them, these terms would be nothing, just phrases for places on your body. Nothing demeaning, everything permitting.
Alas, I must stop, this case I'm insisting
for I'm no cunning linguist...
*insert Dragonforce-style guitar shredding and blast beats*
*tempo : 225BPM*
words which in the public eye are deemed as vulgarity.
What makes the scentific terms as penis and vaginas much less offensive?
Is it not in the hearts and minds of people where foul, foul thoughts spring from?
Without them, these terms would be nothing, just phrases for places on your body. Nothing demeaning, everything permitting.
Alas, I must stop, this case I'm insisting
for I'm no cunning linguist...
*insert Dragonforce-style guitar shredding and blast beats*
*tempo : 225BPM*
glissceule
New member
behold!
it is a big
number!
two to the power of
three two
five eight two
six five seven
minus
one
equals
broken calculator
or
http://www.mersenne.org/prime10.txt
it is a big
number!
two to the power of
three two
five eight two
six five seven
minus
one
equals
broken calculator
or
http://www.mersenne.org/prime10.txt
read the thread
for first time
never tot can be so funny
now i try to contribute
a short poem that can make u bored
went past geylang lorong 8
mehmehs aunties all down there
dunno why they so like
trade penis for pennys
time for my text to get banned
because it is not decent
ha ha i didnt seem to make the poem rhyme of anything like that.
shit.
*car zooms off leaving threatening trails of sperm depleting toxic fumes*
for first time
never tot can be so funny
now i try to contribute
a short poem that can make u bored
went past geylang lorong 8
mehmehs aunties all down there
dunno why they so like
trade penis for pennys
time for my text to get banned
because it is not decent
ha ha i didnt seem to make the poem rhyme of anything like that.
shit.
*car zooms off leaving threatening trails of sperm depleting toxic fumes*
