OM: guys I need ur honest opinion on this

[sofyan]

http://s18.yousendit.com/d.aspx?id=13VJBEPVUZAXR2ZMW5VQEDH72Z

might be using it for a song for a certain competition. so it would be great if u can be honest bout it. the intro starts with a non dist solo. after that its this. we're planning to make it a pretty heavy song tho.

 

[soft]

the idea is there. need to be a little more layback. then when the heavy part come in, will be more powerful.

http://www.mp3.com/tracks/950975/dl_streams.html

 

[sofyan]

Thanks james!

 

[sofyan]

The new version http://s20.yousendit.com/d.aspx?id=1THX96YAXHAI30W7XUBH8PMNDJ

 

[hifi_killer]

wow thats some nice melody very "metallicaish".
the backing vocals sounds abit too dead..

 

[GuitarNoob]

Yeah, I agree with hifi_killer on the nice melody and "metallicaish" part, but some parts of the intro sound abit messy, I think due to the recording, but I the idea of the melody is good. I kinda like the lead vocals though, nice voice. When you finish the whole song post ah, I want to hear =)

 

[lars_ulrich]

well i really dont know how that can be "metallica-ish" but it has a scorpions feel to it. cant really hear the vocals, they're really muffled but its a good little riff that u got there.

 

[fibredrive]

voices a little too muffled here as well, could not really hear the lyrics. but yes, i can see the idea there, and the mood of the genre is there as well. so i would imagine it has great potential, but guess we will onyl find out after you are done with it. cheers

 

[sofyan]

wow thats some nice melody very "metallicaish".
the backing vocals sounds abit too dead..

thanks man, i appreciate it. do u have any ideas on how to make it sound more alive?

 

[sofyan]

thanks again guys, yeah the vocals is muffled. i guess its not that obvious to me cause i know the lyrics. for those who wish to know. here it is.

Pale frozen morning
This feeling inside ...
No one to turn to
The child can't confide
I'm losing my faith ,
My mind and my pride (and my pride)
Forget all that's tranquil
It's all been a lie...

 

[Kaye]

hey hey... it think it's really really really nice.. except for the backup vocals.. maybe can have a higher tone for the backup vocals?

 

[sofyan]

thanks kaye. FYI im the backin vocalist lol. ill try sing higher!

 

[anep]

eh bro, this is some really good shi*.
love the intro.
ermm, IMO, i dun think theres anything rong wif the vocals.
seriously, this is really really nice. :smt041

 

[satch]

the certain competition must be school of rock eh

 

[Newbie]

good intro. yeah i agree with kaye, the backupvox sing higher nice. mmm

vocals try to put in more power? like sound quite "draggy" if u know what i mean. maybe no vibrato or something..

but the guitars fine man. damn nice intro. \m/

 

[atee]

Smart little me went to dl the first version. -_-

I'm liking the intro. Guitar duets always get to me. At 0.40 the 'base' went missing for a little bit though. That little part seemed empty.

The vocal melody is nice, just needs a little work on the pitching. It's much obvious when there's layers of vocals and one is even a teeny bit off.

But overall, good job! Good luck on the competition.

 

[sofyan]

eh bro, this is some really good shi*.
love the intro.
ermm, IMO, i dun think theres anything rong wif the vocals.
seriously, this is really really nice. :smt041

Thanks a lot man!

 

[sofyan]

good intro. yeah i agree with kaye, the backupvox sing higher nice. mmm

vocals try to put in more power? like sound quite "draggy" if u know what i mean. maybe no vibrato or something..

but the guitars fine man. damn nice intro. \m/

thank you i'll let my vocalist know :wink:

 

[sofyan]

Smart little me went to dl the first version. -_-

I'm liking the intro. Guitar duets always get to me. At 0.40 the 'base' went missing for a little bit though. That little part seemed empty.

The vocal melody is nice, just needs a little work on the pitching. It's much obvious when there's layers of vocals and one is even a teeny bit off.

But overall, good job! Good luck on the competition.

thanks fored!