Lyricist Please stand man!!!!!!

[17wil]

neat.....here's smthg i wrote this morning..

If u are welcoming me home, fine
then u'll do by standing for the blind
feeling love and feeling loved is just another feeling
and so without me coming back in chains
its best you keep your minds wide open

capital justice around my neck tonight
she who needs me for another pack-
of beer, of slack, through ages' wreck
somewhere beyond a shipwreck off the crack

A poor man's stay in a farm
cranky chores' keeping me mum
capital justice on today, prisoners go astray
time passes so fast today

so shoot the high fliers down from the sky
an imaginary beast at ur bedside
life in hell is reality today

justice, by who to say
freedom,by who to give
war, by who to stop
peace, by who to order
rebel, by who to lead

who shall they see? the weak
who shall lead? we!

note: i have no idea what this song means.....i wrote it after i just woke up ....

 

[MrRhoads]

reminds me of ratm! 8)

I like the last two paragraphs

 

[Vaiyen]

sometimes the most genius stuff comes when you are half asleep.

 

[17wil]

hahaha ure rite there! weird sometimes...

 

[Scream_ed]

Haha...I noticed that quite a few sets of lyrics here are pretty metasl-influenced. Except for ninja's...that being said, I'm still an unproductive prick... :?

 

[MrRhoads]

don't think purplehaze's lyrics are metal influenced ?

 

[killerclover]

wow!!!!!! goo d suff from everybody...... where's the rest of the lyricist man!!!!!! stand up an dpost ur lyrics people......

Here another one of mine:


Throw caution to the wind
For what is done cannot be undone
The trust I have was simply taken from
Robbed of my soul I’m lost inside

To turn back time I have tried
Mend the pieces together an impossible task
I ask myself the same question every night
Why cling on to the past where it’s all been done

(Chorus)
My fate may change in due time
But when it’ll happen only god knows
For after this, I’ll never be the same
Good bye to the world my last breath speaks
May everyone be celebrating me being gone from the world that seems so cruel to me?

An unanswered question haunts my heart
Grudges I wish not to hold
But these monsters keep creeping in my head
Every little thing it reminds me of those days

(Chorus)
My fate may change in due time
But when it’ll happen only god knows
For after this, I’ll never be the same
Good bye to the world my last breath speaks
May everyone be celebrating me being gone from the world that seems so cruel to me?

When I felt happy but it never shows
I mask the pain, just not to let the world know
Is it wrong for these questions I have in me?


END

 

[petrina_123]

I'm high on doctors orders!
I'm finally free
No rules or boundaries
I'll like to plea borderline insanity
Cos I’m high on doctors orders
When my mind's a blur, its all so clear
The voices that i hear
No more fear No more hate
How strange i feel when im sedate

Chorus:
I'm high on doctors orders
No more thinking
I made up my mind
Everything’s fine
Now everything’s right
There’s nothing to hide
Just doing what i like
No second thoughts
I'll never be bored
When I’m high on doctors orders

I'm high on doctors orders
On his prescription
The pathway to elation
Each pill an invitation to celebration
To be high on doctors orders
Side effects of doziness
Is just the thing i need
Promises of happiness
Almost the same as weed

I'm high on doctors order
Every time i cough or sneeze
I visit my faithful doctor
Coz I know it'll be a breeze
to swallow what he offers
No more school for a day or two
When I’m down with fever or flu
Doctor doctor bet you never knew
The goodness that you actually do!



Yea its called hidh on doctors orders...wrote it one day when i was on meds...

 

[17wil]

nice ....real good...

 

[petrina_123]

^Thank you thank you ...*bows* :lol:

 

[dhalif]

i dunno how to write lyrics

 

[killerclover]

i dunno how to write lyrics

Hantam saje lah!!!!! hahahaha!!!!! :twisted:

 

[Scream_ed]

Dhalif:

But if you write in Malay, please include a translation :lol:

Btw, do you jam with that helmet on?

 

[afterdeath]

hmm....... how abt this?........ :roll:


My Death

As I came to this world
Doing nothing but chanting curses
My last cry for who
My last cry
My last cry for you
Overnight
And I hate you so
Oh God
Please save my soul
Today
Is
A
Fine
Day
To
Dddiiiiieeeeee!!!


sound sucky a not huh?........ :lol:


:twisted:

 

[MrRhoads]

Killerclove : the nicest from you so far imo
Petrina : there's a rhythm to it, i like it!
Afterdeath : tsk tsk.. 'death is a beautiful thing'

 

[mero]

Got a poem that I wrote quite some time ago, was intending to convert this into a song with proper rhyme scheme instead of free verse and add in a chorus, but never got the chance to. Btw, the writer's forum that I visit over at Ultimate-Guitar has a very interesting trend, which is for someone to post a song/poem, then others will have to do a detailed criticism of it, and then the person who crits it is allowed to give a link to his own piece which the thread starter would then be obliged to criticise. Sounds confusing? I suck at explaining simple things like this haha. Ok anyways, here's my piece, it's called Midnight Show

Midnight Show
He lies on a bed, his mind adrift,
Bobbing on a sea of chronicled past.
Of rage, of pain, of tears and hate,
These waves keep churning,
Keep churning in his head.

In his chilly gaze,
There flows a river of suffering.
Torrents of rage, of pain, of tears and hate,
They just keep flowing,
Keep flowing in his head.

He turns on his side, restless and stoic.
Affixed on the whitewashed walls,
Veins of crimson anger,
Cross the piercing onyx orbs.
He watches a grand opera,
Its star is someone he knows.
Acting out familiar scenes
He keeps acting,
Keeps acting in his head.

Tendrils of luminance creep up his side,
Tracing lines on his stony visage.
He unclenches his fists,
And dons his trusty mask.
Attired in blacks and whites,
He switches off the lights.

 

[MrRhoads]

Hmm nice, it got the potential for lyrics. Glad to see more lyricists coming up to post

 

[killerclover]

HEY!!!!! People!!!!! why the sudden silence!!!! hahaha het it going man!!!

 

[EvilGtr]

wa lau....u guys are good sia :?

 

[moggie_54]

Relax lar killer.. Lyrics are made tru thinking.. You can't make lyrics in 1 min.. Unless you are good lar..

Ok2.. Here's a good one..

BACKSTAB

First moment that i saw you
I kept thinking that i'm your man
I'm kind of shy,i don't know why
I hope you understand

Then in class you stare at me
I try to be as cool as can be
I'm shivering right inside
I'm nervous can you see

Chorus

Then one day i found out
You like another guy
Who might thinks alot better than me
It's unfair to me
You never gave me a chance
To prove to you that i am your man

Then one day you made up your mind
To stay with that the other guy
Stop talking to me
I know i'm not as good as he can be

Oh DELIA..
You never gave me a chance
To prove to you that i am your man..[/b]