Lyricist Please stand man!!!!!!

[17wil]

haha well trying to get a rythmn man...my guitaring skills still suck lol..maybe u guys can use these lyrics for ur songs

 

[killerclover]

same here man...... your lyrics have a twisted emotional kinda feel to it man........ nice one will

 

[17wil]

maybe we shld ask james for a lyrics section in this forum...

 

[killerclover]

This one was inspired by a game i played in my ps2......

Tried to run from my future
I failed on countless times
Turned back the clock, not once or twice
I disrupted the balance just to save myself

Desperate for refuge, I run for cover
Battling demons that stalks me
Afraid of death I keep the fight
I can’t take this anymore

(Chorus)
The beast awoke chasing me
Tried to battle it, I cannot win
Running from something that’s so familiar
I ended up disrupting time

What I saw I cannot accept
The freak that’s starring back
The one thing I fear most has come true
I’ve become the monster that I’m running from

 

[17wil]

The one thing I fear most has come true
I’ve become the monster that I’m running from

i like this...

 

[MrRhoads]

nice theme . But maybe you want to apply a few of it literary ? It will sound better

 

[killerclover]

hahaha! thanks for the comments!!!!! will try to edit it more..... most of the lyrics/poems here are a working progress......

 

[MrRhoads]

"The one thing i feared came true
Now i am the monster in my view "

Just a suggestion

 

[MrRhoads]

Mosquitoes
Malicious mosquitoes
Kept orbiting around me
Such irritating creature
Females most evil of all

What can they do with two wings?
They suck you like vampires
Those vectors of diseases
Are the most evil of all

Oh I'll kill them all
With the gases from hell
See they fall one by one
upon the funeral bells

That's the rule of living
It's either you or me
You poison me, i'll take you
upon the funeral bells

This is one of the song i wrote yet i couldn't find a suitable vocalist to sing it.

 

[17wil]

"Tried to battle it, I cannot win"
to
"its a battle i know i can never win"

haha another suggestion

:wink:

 

[MrRhoads]

This is fun!!

 

[17wil]

Mosquitoes
Malicious mosquitoes
Kept orbiting around me
Such irritating creature
Females most evil of all

What can they do with two wings?
They suck you like vampires
Those vectors of diseases
Are the most evil of all

Oh I'll kill them all
With the gases from hell
See they fall one by one
upon the funeral bells

That's the rule of living
It's either you or me
You poison me, i'll take you
upon the funeral bells

This is one of the song i wrote yet i couldn't find a suitable vocalist to sing it.

i tink u need someone with a high pitch for this song..preferable a female..
gives plp a sound of HORROR hahaha

 

[MrRhoads]

hey you got it!! either that or an old sch rocker voice.. know any good vocalist for that? i've everything written down.. just need a vocalist

 

[killerclover]

hey!!!!!! cool ideas from you people..... songs bout mosquitoes!!!!! hahaha :lol: cool stuff from you poeple!!!!!!

 

[MrRhoads]

Basically i got irritated by mosquitoes during an overnight camp at pulau ubin; it sucked me of all else =/

Hey if you guys know any good vocalists don't mind recommending him/her to me? thanks alot!

 

[17wil]

hey you got it!! either that or an old sch rocker voice.. know any good vocalist for that? i've everything written down.. just need a vocalist

hmm...maybe u cud ask LingNemesis ? she's a vocalist...hahax ask her.

 

[17wil]

talking abt that...record it and sent to MOH .....tell them make it to a theme song LOL

 

[MrRhoads]

LingNemesis <-- er pardon me.. where is she? hehehe

MOH is? ministry of something... ? haha sorry!

 

[17wil]

LingNemesis <-- er pardon me.. where is she? hehehe

MOH is? ministry of something... ? haha sorry!

lol here:
http://soft.com.sg/new/modules.php?...e&u=5221&sid=cce6fb9addedd4e642bb5bb4048af14a

MOH = Ministry of Health

 

[MrRhoads]

Thanks alot pal! i'll check her out

by the way people, who do you think write good lyrics?