Acoustic guitar players, critique my acoustic playing!

I don't think it's a song yet. It's more of a riff that you have. It's a decent riff but you have to improvise from there to make a song.

The solo parts were quite poorly played and lacked any sense of melody and hence direction. Tha natural harmonics you played lacked definition. Harmonics require articulation in their playing - it's not a case of hit and run. You gotch to add some sayang for the harmonics to sound out clearly - it looks like you're rushing to get away from the strings before actually hitting them right.

Perhaps it's too soon to call it a song. Keep the main riff and improvise further. Your soloing isn't there yet, so perhaps keep them simple or do away with them altogether. harmonics are a nice addition but ensure that the song leads to them rather than having them played just like that - it will sound awkward. Unless for percussive purposes, harmonics should be played only as part of the melody, to add dynamics.

Good Luck!
 
I think you have to approach the acoustic guitar from an angle thats... well... coming from 2 ways. The acoustic guitar is a percussive instrument and a well, melodic (dunno what you term it) instrument. It has 2 voices.

Other than what RoRk mentioned... I'd say that the playing is quite 1 dimensional. You're scratching the surface of what the acoustic can do. I hear dynamics and stuff, I hear variation in speed and stuff, but its really scratching the surface of things to come.

Without going into the specifics of melody, your solo, your touch, your what not... let's talk about rhythm. I think solo acoustic guitar needs a few things. Groove. Texture (how you paint a sound scape). Melody. All or a mix. Rhythm is something well, I see you lack and its a good thing to learn because its easy to see the improvements and value in practicing it; you even get to bring it over into electric guitar!

So look up some rhythm playing on youtube. Check out drummers. Check out Dave Matthews unplugged. Tommy Emmanuel. Some good ole blues fingerstyle for that shuffle kind of vibe. Swing music is nice. Django is always a good search. You can skip all that tap-on-guitar-and-tap-on-strings kind of playing - IMO its plain overdone and sometimes, the beauty of the acoustic guitar is in the simple sounding things.
 
woah .. thats alotta Am and F...

i think u need to learn some covers... take note of how they write their songs. what chords they use... analyze their song structures and apply it to your own music.
 
Thanks for the feedback, people!

I think Tommy Emmanuel is a bit out of my class for now haha. I can play Hotel California by the Eagles and White Lion's When the children cry, but I'm kinda new to the acoustic guitar instrumental thingy.

Any recommended songs I could particularly attempt? Thanks!
 
I think you should listen and listen... and listen. Seek to emulate... don't need to rush into covering stuff.

Steal ideas, some little nugget somewhere, drop it into whatever you're playing right now.

Record it. Practice it. Play it...

I mean, there's more to just covering - which can be good... but sometimes, its seems like the whole emphasis is just... that.
 
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Not wanting to be too regimental but an acoustic piece normally requires at least 15 different finger positions. And I'm talking about a piece that's slightly more than 2 minutes.

You'll also want to rethink your right-hand style of playing. Losing the pick and going fingerstyle will open up lots of options for you in terms of how you play a chord. With fingerstyle, you have the option of plucking all strings simultaneously, strumming, and arpeggios. And there are variations for doing each of the three - again opening up lots of choices for you and immediately adding more dynamics to your playing.

Always listen to the best out there. Anything less means that you are shortchanging yourself - not a good thing.

In the 80s, lots of good rock and progressive guitarists had one acoustic piece within an album. Sad to say, that practice has died out these since.

Charlie Christian, Django Reinhart - both for soloing. Eventhough it's old jazz, it'll open your mind up to the way guitar soloing started on an acoustic instrument and the wonders of chord progressions.

Monte Montgomerry is awesomeness personified! Tommy Emmaneul is pretty good. Chet Atkins, Steve Howe, Flamenco guitarists are also a good listen.

There was a thread on songwriting, where RoRK shared what I think are good tips. Perhaps a look there might be good for you too. Essentially, be a good listener before you write your own stuff. And if you feel a need to write then do so but continue to lsiten to good stuff.

Your better stuff will come later rather than early. So starting early doesn't hurt at all. What you eventually come up with in your first few songs may eventually be broken up into parts for other songs, later on, as you develop your playing techniques and songwriting skills.

Good Luck and Have Fun!
 
Actually I think I kinda started late. I've been playing the acoustic for around 6-7 years but only very, very recently did I think of going into instrumentals. But never too late to start, I guess. :D Back then I was more into becoming a session player, or a guitarist in a band.

Hmmm maybe I should play without the pick more, I recently discovered that without the pick, I can really start adding some percussion to my playing. I'm so used to using a pick though, since I always use picks for electric guitar and for the CCM I usually play on my acoustics.

But will give it a try...
 
hmm.. i think for modern day stuff... john mayer and jason mraz are awesome. listen to their songs... really really good stuff.

percussive stuff? check out their live videos.. songs like Neon ... dynamo of volition all have very good ideas.

oh and yes. monte montgomery is god.
 
Wow shredcow and RoRK surely got some excellent insight! Great now i can also learn from what they have said, treat this as a motivation to work harder eugene!
 
It was nice of you to share your "The Journey". I applaud you for your attempt. Wish there are more people like you around. We all got to start somewhere.

I guess you got some basic right. It would be good if you get to be more familiar with your fret board as well as the rudiment of modes, arpeggios, intervals etc....notwithstanding that you got some good notes. There is however not much of a phrasing and/or feel as to what you are trying to say in your running of notes. It is somewhat of just whack and see where the notes will take me.

Keep at it brother and maybe get hold of the experts in soft to give you tips such as fundamental approach to soloing or how best to negotiate chord changes etc.

Meanwhile, good luck to your journey.....it's a lifelong affair....perpetually frustrating yet when you it the right notes, phrase etc .....it's pure joy. Some call it ORGASM...HEEHEE
 
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