poetry/lyrics section
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Dalif_Murderdoll
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i actually have thoughts of publishing a tome of poetry!Check out my site
www.soliloquyindespair.blogspot.com
www.soliloquyindespair.blogspot.com
yy_fuctup
New member
err..im gonna post my poems and stuff by the dates i wrote them..from earliest to most recent..pardon me if they really suck..im just a little stupid kiddo with an empty head afterall.
the beginning
The beginning
of nothing
emptiness
fills the void
shades of black
death in silence
tolerating the pain
bearing the torturing
hanging by the thread
threatening to break
screams unheard
gasps for breath
dark crismon red
blood trickling down
open wounds
never closing
will to live fading
surrendering
to fate
handing u my life
---------------------------
the end
Clap of thunder
clandestine whispers
masked by
the decieving smiles
slowly gives way
to the end of the world
return to where i belong
my master, my lord, lucifer
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disillusioned
Your twisted smile
your piercing stares
your haunting laughter
your disfigured face
your surreptitious thoughts
your tainted mind
my evil doings
our distorted reality
----------------------
dream that won't begin
Bleeding
aching
hurting
wishing
hoping
praying
hating
loving
waiting
for a dream
that won't begin
-----------------------
i am
I am your memory,
distorted reality,
tampled with,
lurking,
within your conscience,
beneath
your consciousness,
an ambush,
waiting,
patiently,
chancing upon
an attack.
i am your thoughts,
haunting,
questioning,
the deepest,
darkest
secrets
of your mind,
the explicit
details
of the disillusions
forced upon
you.
-----------------------------
to
To every star that fell,
to every heart that burnt,
to every hearse made,
to every soul returned,
to the rigthful master,
to the ruler of the throne,
to the blood-curdling screams,
to the red on the scythe,
to the threshold of darkness,
to the eternal pyre,
to the crimson stains on your hands,
to the comforting pain,
i drink.
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thats just a few..for now..plz give me comments on how to imrpove..thnx..
the beginning
The beginning
of nothing
emptiness
fills the void
shades of black
death in silence
tolerating the pain
bearing the torturing
hanging by the thread
threatening to break
screams unheard
gasps for breath
dark crismon red
blood trickling down
open wounds
never closing
will to live fading
surrendering
to fate
handing u my life
---------------------------
the end
Clap of thunder
clandestine whispers
masked by
the decieving smiles
slowly gives way
to the end of the world
return to where i belong
my master, my lord, lucifer
------------------------------
disillusioned
Your twisted smile
your piercing stares
your haunting laughter
your disfigured face
your surreptitious thoughts
your tainted mind
my evil doings
our distorted reality
----------------------
dream that won't begin
Bleeding
aching
hurting
wishing
hoping
praying
hating
loving
waiting
for a dream
that won't begin
-----------------------
i am
I am your memory,
distorted reality,
tampled with,
lurking,
within your conscience,
beneath
your consciousness,
an ambush,
waiting,
patiently,
chancing upon
an attack.
i am your thoughts,
haunting,
questioning,
the deepest,
darkest
secrets
of your mind,
the explicit
details
of the disillusions
forced upon
you.
-----------------------------
to
To every star that fell,
to every heart that burnt,
to every hearse made,
to every soul returned,
to the rigthful master,
to the ruler of the throne,
to the blood-curdling screams,
to the red on the scythe,
to the threshold of darkness,
to the eternal pyre,
to the crimson stains on your hands,
to the comforting pain,
i drink.
---------------------------
thats just a few..for now..plz give me comments on how to imrpove..thnx..
frankiejazz
New member
i wanted to post some lyric, but with all the emo emo angsty lyrics that've gone up i've become a little intimidated. :smt089
frankiejazz
New member
:smt058
it's a very jazzy song
Joseph Jeremiah
This, right here, is a simple tune
I wrote while sitting by the moon
Well, i must confess that wasn't true
I wrote it thinking about you
a pathetic lie, I know I told
but alas my love, I'm getting old
I need someone for me to hold
by the fire when it gets too cold..
Dear Joseph Jeremiah,
you set my heart afire
the light of my desire
Is you
Dear joseph Jeremy,
you're the knees of the bees
you hold my hanky wen i sneeze
Love me, please
HAHAHA :lol:
it's a very jazzy song
Joseph Jeremiah
This, right here, is a simple tune
I wrote while sitting by the moon
Well, i must confess that wasn't true
I wrote it thinking about you
a pathetic lie, I know I told
but alas my love, I'm getting old
I need someone for me to hold
by the fire when it gets too cold..
Dear Joseph Jeremiah,
you set my heart afire
the light of my desire
Is you
Dear joseph Jeremy,
you're the knees of the bees
you hold my hanky wen i sneeze
Love me, please
HAHAHA :lol:
daryl
New member
Go
I'm gone just like the wind,
with a thousand different begs to differ constantly running through my mind
(but it all sounds the same now), splitting me into halves.
Oh, how this illness has blessed me, I've been stuck in this rutty nutshell for too long now,
and I don't think I can take it much longer now.
This is the natural instinct to danger (go).
This is when the room is overcrowded (go).
This is the easiest way out (go).
This is the choice I made (go).
Go, I gotta go.
I'm gone just like yesterday,
With a thousand different shadows trailing my footsteps, following me wherever I go.
The bright sun in front blinds me, and sometimes all I have for solace is my past.
But it only makes me cry, and now my tears have run dry.
All I wanted was for you to hold on to me (hold on to me).
Sorry, but the wind came and blew me away, away from you.
Go, I gotta go.
I'm gone just like the summer,
and a thousand different faceless faces float past me (they're on their way).
The cold winter sets in, and sweet summer creeps silently away.
(Oh my subtle beauty is gone.)
The bitter cold assails me, and I feel as if countless poison needles have penetrated my skin.
Taking in the poison of love, I am rendered immobile, in the blink of infinity.
So I say
Come, take me by the hand, my fallen angel (I have fallen).
Put a halo beneath my feet and we shall go down to heaven, our heaven, where everything burns.
Let's go?
Go, I gotta go.
I'm gone just like the wind,
with a thousand different begs to differ constantly running through my mind
(but it all sounds the same now), splitting me into halves.
Oh, how this illness has blessed me, I've been stuck in this rutty nutshell for too long now,
and I don't think I can take it much longer now.
This is the natural instinct to danger (go).
This is when the room is overcrowded (go).
This is the easiest way out (go).
This is the choice I made (go).
Go, I gotta go.
I'm gone just like yesterday,
With a thousand different shadows trailing my footsteps, following me wherever I go.
The bright sun in front blinds me, and sometimes all I have for solace is my past.
But it only makes me cry, and now my tears have run dry.
All I wanted was for you to hold on to me (hold on to me).
Sorry, but the wind came and blew me away, away from you.
Go, I gotta go.
I'm gone just like the summer,
and a thousand different faceless faces float past me (they're on their way).
The cold winter sets in, and sweet summer creeps silently away.
(Oh my subtle beauty is gone.)
The bitter cold assails me, and I feel as if countless poison needles have penetrated my skin.
Taking in the poison of love, I am rendered immobile, in the blink of infinity.
So I say
Come, take me by the hand, my fallen angel (I have fallen).
Put a halo beneath my feet and we shall go down to heaven, our heaven, where everything burns.
Let's go?
Go, I gotta go.
fictionaire_gse
New member
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I
I
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I'm a little butterfly.
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I
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I'm a little butterfly.
AgingYouth
New member
As usual, my bro fictionaire_gse bro is a man of wealth and taste... He and bro edder bro share the same taste in poetry...
Have you guys seen the ultimate guitar poetry/songwriting forum? It's based on a you-critique-mine-and-i'll-critique-yours kinda thing, might be a point to take note of
I'd contribute some material but I can't find my stuff at the moment plus I'm pretty busy at the moment haha :lol:
I'd contribute some material but I can't find my stuff at the moment plus I'm pretty busy at the moment haha :lol:
here is my first serious lyrics writing after a long while haha
wrotethis when i was really down a few months back and after watching Superman as well.
Why the world does not need Superman
so the world is bleak without you,
and the lives that's gone around you
you left us then , you held us up , you made us think you've a heart of gold
and made us dry ,
you dont deserve the pride
the world lives on without you
our lives has gone on well
with the lies that blind the lesser few
we hope you'll come back soon
and we find that that's not true
that's how we stood
that's the way thing's gonna be
its just a matter of a belief
that's what true men receives
and that's the way it is
no hero to save us , no crime to scare us
and that is why, that is why
the world dont need superman
why the world dont need a superman
a song about everyday life from a lovesick person's point of view. its basically called, the lovesick city.
seven days a week and i'm busy like a bee
my mommy told me that its time for my tea
i sought after the bounty , made my mama hated me
God knows i cared , may you rest in peace
high and higher can you take me to the sky
like an empty vessel i'll make the most noise
i hope i can touch you but you caught me like a fly
can you let me kiss your face i promise you a choice
i went for a ride, you switched off the machines
you called me a rat , yet i gave you my cat
then and then please dont play with my ka-ching
she knows i'm there, will you sleep with me
high and higher can you take me to the sky
like an empty vessel i'll make the most noise
i hope i can touch you but you caught me like a fly
can you let me kiss your face i promise you a choice
if you come with me, for all of eternity
i'll send yo ua rose 'til you get to university
i'll wait for you at the place of community
until the day i lose my sanity
high and higher can you take me to the sky
like an empty vessel i'll make the most noise
i hope i can touch you but you caught me like a fly
can you let me kiss your face i promise you a choice
comments and critiques appreciated!
wrotethis when i was really down a few months back and after watching Superman as well.
Why the world does not need Superman
so the world is bleak without you,
and the lives that's gone around you
you left us then , you held us up , you made us think you've a heart of gold
and made us dry ,
you dont deserve the pride
the world lives on without you
our lives has gone on well
with the lies that blind the lesser few
we hope you'll come back soon
and we find that that's not true
that's how we stood
that's the way thing's gonna be
its just a matter of a belief
that's what true men receives
and that's the way it is
no hero to save us , no crime to scare us
and that is why, that is why
the world dont need superman
why the world dont need a superman
a song about everyday life from a lovesick person's point of view. its basically called, the lovesick city.
seven days a week and i'm busy like a bee
my mommy told me that its time for my tea
i sought after the bounty , made my mama hated me
God knows i cared , may you rest in peace
high and higher can you take me to the sky
like an empty vessel i'll make the most noise
i hope i can touch you but you caught me like a fly
can you let me kiss your face i promise you a choice
i went for a ride, you switched off the machines
you called me a rat , yet i gave you my cat
then and then please dont play with my ka-ching
she knows i'm there, will you sleep with me
high and higher can you take me to the sky
like an empty vessel i'll make the most noise
i hope i can touch you but you caught me like a fly
can you let me kiss your face i promise you a choice
if you come with me, for all of eternity
i'll send yo ua rose 'til you get to university
i'll wait for you at the place of community
until the day i lose my sanity
high and higher can you take me to the sky
like an empty vessel i'll make the most noise
i hope i can touch you but you caught me like a fly
can you let me kiss your face i promise you a choice
comments and critiques appreciated!
this is one of me writings...lame though.
And i didnt noe how to end it off so yeah its a crappy ending.
Dandelion
I am a dandelion
Let loose to float
Never knowing where to go
Or what to do
I fly.
I am a dandelion
Among millions in this field
I dance according to the wind
Following mood swings
I glide.
I am a dandelion
Never still, always moving
No directions don't hinder me
Never trying to be anything else
I'm happy.
I am a dandelion
Forever floating in this field of dandelions
Sometimes i collide into another like me
But otherwise I'm fine
I keep moving.
I am a dandelion
Soon to be still
Once the wind dies
I feel restricted.
I'm dead.
And i didnt noe how to end it off so yeah its a crappy ending.
Dandelion
I am a dandelion
Let loose to float
Never knowing where to go
Or what to do
I fly.
I am a dandelion
Among millions in this field
I dance according to the wind
Following mood swings
I glide.
I am a dandelion
Never still, always moving
No directions don't hinder me
Never trying to be anything else
I'm happy.
I am a dandelion
Forever floating in this field of dandelions
Sometimes i collide into another like me
But otherwise I'm fine
I keep moving.
I am a dandelion
Soon to be still
Once the wind dies
I feel restricted.
I'm dead.
