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[hub4thailand]

this song is written by my friend ling and me on guitar



http://www.myspace.com/jeffandling

 

[RoRK]

Hmmm. Good voice. The guitar is pretty good except that it becomes monotonous after a while. Perhaps changing the style for a couple of verses/bridge/chorus would be nice.

Cheers
RoRK

 

[hub4thailand]

thx bro

 

[DoubleDecker]

Hey Jeff,

I love that track alot ... and like Rork, I do have some suggestions. Like ... adding in some small bits of instrumentation solo, might help to create some texture or peak.

DD

 

[rottenramone]

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pm u again, Doubledecker!

 

[hub4thailand]

thx guys yeah its a demo will take all the comments into good use

 

[DoubleDecker]

RR ... replied.

 

[DoubleDecker]

I hate to say this ... make me sound like a psycho ... but but but ... i just can't get enough of those vocals lah. I'm loving those vocals so so so so muchie.

 

[zoom8080]

Wow she sounds like Corrinne May...

Good vocals, nice songs :lol:

How did u record yr song? in a studio?

 

[hub4thailand]

on a desktop bro using toneport

 

[hub4thailand]

actually shes my upstairs neighbour

 

[soft]

a bit lesser reverb to bring the vocal to the front. can double the guitar track, hard pan one to left and the other to right. add 2ms delay to the right track. this will make the acoustic guitar fuller.

the guitar playing need more confidence. the notes are there but somehow lack the dynamics of a performance.

this is the kind of song that should be submitted for the SOFT Song Writing competition! hee..hee..

 

[hub4thailand]

thx for the technical tip

 

[DoubleDecker]

actually shes my upstairs neighbour

WHAT!?!?!? Lucky you ... I swear the next time I move house, I make sure I have vocalists staying as my neighbour. :?

 

[DazzLing]

Hey guys,

Thks 4 all yo helpful feedback...I really enjoyed recording the track (AND reading the comments), kudos to Jeff n his lovely wife, Tam. We'll definitely reduce the echo the next time round. Look forward 2 putting up more stuff here in the near future when we come back from a Xmas concert in Thailand.

Wohoo!

:lol:

 

[rottenramone]

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i take it that dazzling be jeff's upstairs neighbour?

u is rocks!

 

[DoubleDecker]

Do we need confirmation? LOL! :lol:

 

[DazzLing]

I is the Ling

Wanted to sign up as Ling but it was taken already.

But DazzLing also good lah.

Tens 4 the rhetoric tho, dude!

:wink:

 

[DoubleDecker]

Welcome to SOFT! :wink:

 

[DazzLing]

Tens DD!

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