My first ever original
all by me. (lyrics, melody, playing)
lyrics
Title : She
She streamroll like a shineshine down my hair
she doesnt have to put on make up to be free
lately in the morning she peel me fruits
oranges that are fresh made from china
Bail my hands
Bail my hands
3 lovelovelovelovelovelovelove meh meh
singing bail my hands
lately in the summer I rent your boat
I could go on and on and on
Comments range from sounds like nirvana to complete disaster.
Whats your take?
Pls do not hit and run, give me constructive comments, I am passionate about music. I do agree it does not appeal to the mainstream audience though.
http://www.soundclick.com/bands/default.cfm?bandID=949513
all by me. (lyrics, melody, playing)
lyrics
Title : She
She streamroll like a shineshine down my hair
she doesnt have to put on make up to be free
lately in the morning she peel me fruits
oranges that are fresh made from china
Bail my hands
Bail my hands
3 lovelovelovelovelovelovelove meh meh
singing bail my hands
lately in the summer I rent your boat
I could go on and on and on
Comments range from sounds like nirvana to complete disaster.
Whats your take?
Pls do not hit and run, give me constructive comments, I am passionate about music. I do agree it does not appeal to the mainstream audience though.
http://www.soundclick.com/bands/default.cfm?bandID=949513
