Expanded version of The First Moment

[greentea23]

Hi all,

I posted a short musical idea here some time ago. I've now expanded on it, and you can hear it here :

http://soundclick.com/share?songid=8122795

The original short snippet is here :
http://soundclick.com/share?songid=7913265

Tips/comments for improvement appreciated. Thanks.

Cheers

 

[greentea23]

Hi all,

Following some suggestions to remove the drums, I've done just that and I think it's more lyrical that way. What do you guys think?

http://soundclick.com/share?songid=8128603

 

[amptones]

damn this is good stuff once again, sounds like a film music to me, mind sharing whats the plot about?, the chord progressions seems like a variation from reverie in D major i guess

 

[greentea23]

Hi amptones,

Haha, yes there is a story all right, but I'm afraid it's private. All I can say is that it's a sweet one... or maybe bittersweet?

Enjoy!