Hmmm... the 1st solo, the clean one... is the guitar out of tune? It sounds pretty out of tune on the 2nd, 3rd and 4th strings to me. Either that or your bends aren't reaching the pitch. Watch your mixing levels, your guitar is clipping...
During the 2nd solo, the distorted solo... the bends don't reach the pitch... a couple of wrong notes... there's some nice chromatics done but those need to go smoother...
3rd distorted solo... gotta watch your fast playing... it really sounds like you are just hammering out the notes. Watch the muting of your open strings when you play faster... then again, watch the tuning and bending, plus your level is clipping too.
4th distorted solo... the mix is good, doesn't clip. Good effort on this... the faster runs were pretty clean but at 3:50 - 4:02 the lick has got to be refined, nice idea but gotta be smoother.
Overall, this was a nice improvisation over a great backing track... hmmm... Both players have got their pentatonics going for them but rem that as you reach for the next faster/better/smoother/shreddier lick, you got to get it under your belt first. I liked some of the ideas there, but there's got to be more practice so you guys will OWN those licks.
And yeah, dong, you took the 1st and 3rd solos right? Got to watch your mixing... your guitar is clipping pretty bad, esp in the clean beginning.
Work hard guys, like what thor666 said, this really sounds like improvisation... work on your feel, like vibrato and bending... plus playing smoothly with loads of confidence. You don't need speed as much as confidence or should I say, attitude. Work those traits into your music and you'll be crafting good music soon.
