An A cappella song (sounds like opera)

Paynk

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Okay I thought of this in my bathroom. Super short. Sorry for some of the shabby harmonies. Didn't have time to record many times because dad and mom came back heh.

And please tell me how to improve the lyrics, cos it's sort of like.. chucked in quickly so that I can record it asap before I forget the tune.

Anyway, help me name this if you have an idea ok :)

http://constellation.nu/paynk/yettobenamed.mp3

LYRICS:

She is the flower
of the winter night,
that never says die
to the cold..

She is the cloud
of the bluest sky,
but the day you left
she began to cry

The day where she
started to whither,
her hairs were of silver
her eyes filled with tears

The day where the
rain started to splatter,
you saw in your new love
a shadow of her
 
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