2 new tracks! (Electronic music)

[alvinoeffect]

Have 2 new tracks up, Craving Your Presence (genre: house), and an electronic rendition of One Republic's Apologize.

Both tracks can be heard at http://www.myspace.com/soundpool33

Do have a listen if you have the time, will appreciate any comments.
Thanks!

 

[adsr]

Have 2 new tracks up, Craving Your Presence (genre: house), and an electronic rendition of One Republic's Apologize.

Both tracks can be heard at http://www.myspace.com/soundpool33

Do have a listen if you have the time, will appreciate any comments.
Thanks!

2 cents of Craving Your Presence:

Track is awfully dry, especially for percussion
Trumpet sounds tinny, flat, almost comical and doesn't blend with the paul van dyke/whatever-esque lead synth parts
Elements sound disjointed from each other
Mix is focused greatly on the sides, lacks center anchor and focus

 

[alvinoeffect]

Hey adsr, thanks for the comments!

I've noticed that for the trumpet-like sound as well. Still working on the track, will heed advice and try to rectify the issues present.

On a side note, its getting somewhat difficult to work on certain parts as my cpu is overloading alr. Bummer.

 

[benjaminang]

Hi, I saw your thread and was interested because there aren't that many electronic musicians on the forums. I haven't seen the follow up - are you making any new tracks?
Ben
Electronic Music Lab
www.eml.org.sg