1st Orig Up

[Yaz]

Hey softies,

Our band has come up with an original, but sadly drums and vox haven't been recorded yet. Due to the fact that we record at home. Theres also some covers. MySpace.com - SorfinA - All - Rock / Alternativa - www.myspace.com/sorfina

We're saving up to go for studio recording. So softies do give some feedback, i know it wont be enough without the vox and drums, any feedback will be deeply appreciated.

Cheers,

SorfinA

 

[RoRK]

Sounds good so far. Arrangement seems to be on track. If anyhthing, I'd change, ever so slightly the slow guitar picking part so that it doesn't so Creed-like. The solo isn't in my taste - seems out of place. But perhaps it'll gel with the rest of the song once the vocals are in.

Looking forward to hearing all of it.

Cheers
RoRK

 

[Yaz]

Hey there rork, thanks for listening and really appreciate your feedback.

We still looking for ways to revamp the song. :mrgreen: