:lol: post one way, your wrong, post the other your also wrong... waste time only! :lol:
Nomis, you have no idea how many people have been helped thru this forum... try not to jump to conclusions because of the 2 threads
recently.
I'll try to put it forth
nicely this time.
Dhalif, this isn't your best take. In fact, this is one of the more poor representations of your playing, regardless of broken thumb or not.
If it were abt how good one can play due to their "disabilities" then this guy would just pwn us all:
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=LzXs16_H18k
:wink:
I urge you to look away from the pentatonics (unless you can do it like Marty Friedman) because in this piece, you really just run up and down the scale. Agreed? No? Yes? The notes in the music speaks for itself.
Plus, the backing track is just a simple one, no dramatic chord changes nothing... That and playing that way? Its quite the recipe for a boring shredfest.
Prodigious skill - Check.
Good vibrato - Check.
Originality - very very low.
Peppering the pentatonics with chromatics, exactly what you do here, sounds like you just use it to play faster. On the other hand, if Marty can pepper his pentatonic solos with chromatics but sound so fresh and distinct... you're the monster player here, you can figure it out with ease.
Now, its good for new-commers to take note of some history.
I recall tracks you have done years back. Apart from the mistakes in this track (due to the thumb), you essentially sound the same (nothing wrong), play the same way (nothing wrong) and that's it... its a carbon copy. (Malmsteen? Anyone?)
And that would be the "main" issue - there has been little progression, no diversity.
How big is "main"? Malmsteen still thinks he is hot as hell, suits him to a T no?
Like what Paulo mentioned to me, you should look up some flamenco or jazz standard to just put the small circle you are in, push it a little wider.
There. That's it. My honest, un-condescendingly frank opinion presented in a non-flame-worthy manner.
Its all up to you. If your mindset has changed from before then I say good for you - you'll make it far. Otherwise... go to youtube, Singapore is just a dot in the world - its going to be harder to make your mark.