valentine is a sad day...

[strats]

...for singles like jake. that is why he is feeling blue and playing the blues!

http://s21.yousendit.com/d.aspx?id=0H532GMVKYYRM1JCFGBBR6LQOH

comment on everything from tone,playing, anything. he couldn't think of anything else so everything after 1.30 is crap. constructive comments please!

 

[Vaiyen]

is 'jake' you, dude?

 

[hay88]

hey do't mind sharing the backing i think it's cool

 

[strats]

is 'jake' you, dude?

no lah.jake is my best friend. knew him for almost 17 years already. we go around everywhere together. heck he evens sleeps in the same bed as me

hay: here you go mate


http://s21.yousendit.com/d.aspx?id=2F288A5RQQ1LA0JXYQPKYYB0FQ[/list]

 

[DarknessFury]

*Psst, Jake is his imaginary friend*

 

[TequilaSunrise]

I think you need to work on your bends a little more, it sounds slightly off at some parts, or maybe it's due to the blues scale, i'm not entirely sure. The part where the 2nd guitar tone/sound comes in also sounds abit weird, like it was almost off key or something.

 

[gutturalpiss]

jake is improving. think abt it. only 3 to 4 mths net average of playing. n please. get over it jake. there is no jake. u r a very disturbed boy. u need the shrink. come c me.

 

[sofyan]

indeed you are improving FAQEH

 

[Jiro]

Nice effort. Personally though, I think you overused the slides alot. Also, maybe you could put more feel into the song since its blues, by adding wider vibratos^^