Thunder Cover (Acoustic) - Comments please?

[Exophagy]

Hey, so I recorded an acoustic version of Thunder by Boys Like Girls.
Was hoping to get comments to improve on my singing.
Constructive feedback is much appreciated

http://www.imeem.com/people/WCzBmr6/music/EqOWJKFY/kyle-oliveiro-thunder-acoustic-demomp3/

 

[joker36]

hey let me rate overall okay? 90+% over 100% haha.its the best cover ive heard so far.kick in more attack on d chorus =)

 

[KhaiHan]

Gah. For some reason i can't get the player up. :S

 

[Exophagy]

Thanks for the comments.
KhaiHan, maybe can try accessing it from here http://www.imeem.com/people/WCzBmr6/music/

 

[btherl]

Your voice is getting drowned out by the guitar there (either that or my cheapo speakers suck. Probably both).