tender shmender

[strats]

my first attempt at tender surrender.. i did injustice to my guitar hero.. i suck

http://www.savefile.com/files/9861097

 

[EvilGtr]

hey strats.... i would say that i wouldnt have dared to attempt this song with the settings u had! No reverb, pure clean! Well of course playing is a little off, but I bet with the good settings your 44 seconds would have passed! Nice try!

 

[hifi_killer]

Your playing is abit choppy, pay attention to the note duration and the beat..
nevertheless its a good attempt

 

[TheBreed]

r u intending to finish up the whole song?

u got some good dynamics control there. keep working on it, u wil be there soon.

im sure u need more than a boss HM, maybe a reverb or delay or something...

 

[strats]

evilgtr: i didn't know you would need reverb for this song :? i'll make another recording with hopefully better playing this time.. i think my clean isn't bright enough, my friend commented it was too dark and mellow..

hifi: yeah its a little choppy.. i'll practice it more and give it another go..

thebreed: i would finish the whole song if not for the legato part.. seems scary :? i'll try to get hold of a delay or reverb pedal, or just use audicity's reverb plug in..

thanks for your kind comments everyone!

 

[strats]

thats not the best! try harder!

 

[TheBreed]

geezz... this is getting irritating..