Rendition of Mary had a little lamb
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I like how you go around trying to create cool phrases. Its very raw - you don't practice this right? - but the vibe is there. Things like bringing in mixolydian tones and alternating between fluid lines & punctuated phrases.
Here are my top picks.
1:42 - that quick strumming part is very cool but has so much more potential. Perhaps more syncopation and a little less "straight-forward-ness" would be cool? Think stop-go-stop-go kind of playful vibe.
2:11 - that pull-off section sounded really funky. I think its the golden moment of the track. Before this, the strumming was straightforward, so this little lick actually perked the ears up.
Your lasssst note, that bend. I noticed your picking hand... dude, try this, pick HARDER. Move your picking hand further away and slam it down. I get your idea - ending with a screaming bend ya? But its a little weak. Don't need a pinch harmonic but you need to WACK it.
Actually, this applies to the rest of the track.
You gotta hit when you gotta hit.
Here are my top picks.
1:42 - that quick strumming part is very cool but has so much more potential. Perhaps more syncopation and a little less "straight-forward-ness" would be cool? Think stop-go-stop-go kind of playful vibe.
2:11 - that pull-off section sounded really funky. I think its the golden moment of the track. Before this, the strumming was straightforward, so this little lick actually perked the ears up.
Your lasssst note, that bend. I noticed your picking hand... dude, try this, pick HARDER. Move your picking hand further away and slam it down. I get your idea - ending with a screaming bend ya? But its a little weak. Don't need a pinch harmonic but you need to WACK it.
Actually, this applies to the rest of the track.
You gotta hit when you gotta hit.
