Hoping to find some 高人指点. Will appreciate constructive comments to help me improve my singing. Thanks 
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=djBoii2KuQw
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=djBoii2KuQw
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Please help me improve :)
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blueprintstudios
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hmm it is lacking feel, and you tend to be more pitchy/flat. you tend to "slope" your pitches. almost mumblin'.
do read up http://tinyurl.com/vocalsguide hope it's of help. although it's more catered to english singing.
do read up http://tinyurl.com/vocalsguide hope it's of help. although it's more catered to english singing.
blueprintstudios
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you only truly suck when you give up.
we all gotta suck and start somewhere.
maybe cos CNY period now.
we all gotta suck and start somewhere.
maybe cos CNY period now.
Hey ueirun,
The 2 most outstanding issues right now for your singing are:
1) You are singing by straining your vocal chords and throat
2) Your chinese pronunciation is improper, especially with words that start with the 'S' or 'Sh' sounds.
Someone else already mentioned pitching =)
You can gradually fix number 2 by yourself through READING (note: read, not sing) practice. It's good to get some supervision for the first problem though, if not you may hurt your voice production organs in the long run. Do give me a call if you're interested in singing lessons.
91880920
Vocal coach,
Gary.
The 2 most outstanding issues right now for your singing are:
1) You are singing by straining your vocal chords and throat
2) Your chinese pronunciation is improper, especially with words that start with the 'S' or 'Sh' sounds.
Someone else already mentioned pitching =)
You can gradually fix number 2 by yourself through READING (note: read, not sing) practice. It's good to get some supervision for the first problem though, if not you may hurt your voice production organs in the long run. Do give me a call if you're interested in singing lessons.
91880920
Vocal coach,
Gary.
Thanks for the feedback.
I try to record the same song again with the original vocals playing through my headphones while i record my singing. Still have pitch and rhythm problems. But i hope to know what i need to work on.
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=26Z7ajgXmaU
I try to record the same song again with the original vocals playing through my headphones while i record my singing. Still have pitch and rhythm problems. But i hope to know what i need to work on.
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=26Z7ajgXmaU
KhaiHan
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You're type 2: has potential. go for lessons or get a coach.
And change the key. your falsetto is not too bad to be honest.
but yeah, pitching needs work. go and search on how to breathe properly. i seriously doubt you're not breathing properly.
i'd give you around 6 months if you seriously get help. right now you're a 3.5/10 to me.
And change the key. your falsetto is not too bad to be honest.
but yeah, pitching needs work. go and search on how to breathe properly. i seriously doubt you're not breathing properly.
i'd give you around 6 months if you seriously get help. right now you're a 3.5/10 to me.
ANDY82
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Wheeeee
hm.. verison 2 is better than 1 one, but verison 2 you sound are very careful with your words and pitch which can lost the "feel" part. You have to imagine the feel, example this song to me is more on to comfortable feeling, relax feel. the "fake voice" is kinda out, i notice when you going to hit high notes you intened to stop " the flow" going.. few possible of "cnat hit notes" not enough warm up or not enough confident.
remenber no one is bron to sing. even they are they too have to go through hardwork..
hm.. verison 2 is better than 1 one, but verison 2 you sound are very careful with your words and pitch which can lost the "feel" part. You have to imagine the feel, example this song to me is more on to comfortable feeling, relax feel. the "fake voice" is kinda out, i notice when you going to hit high notes you intened to stop " the flow" going.. few possible of "cnat hit notes" not enough warm up or not enough confident.
remenber no one is bron to sing. even they are they too have to go through hardwork..
KhaiHan
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well, vibrato shouldn't be forced in my opinion. sometimes it gets overboard and sounds like a vibrator stuck in your throat instead.
anyway, if you're tone deaf, it's pretty hard to tell you. :S
if you wanna do it as a hobby, it's fine. but if you're serious about singing, you should really consider your ability.
anyway, if you're tone deaf, it's pretty hard to tell you. :S
if you wanna do it as a hobby, it's fine. but if you're serious about singing, you should really consider your ability.
