Platform Gap

[underaged]

Here are 2 of our gig videos. Do let us know what you think of them. Thxs.

Orphan
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Kp7W2lWpXDc

Would you stay
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=dWHi-QmdAdM&feature=channel

The Platform Gap

 

[soft]

Hi there

For Orphan , the key is a little high for the singer. Could try maybe a tone down. This way, when hitting the high notes, he can be more expressive and not flat out.

Something about the song arrangement. Could try to have more variation/dynamic in the build up of the song. For example, after the first chorus, when the second verse come in, the electric guitar could cut off the distortion efx and use a more 'cooling' tone. Strum less. Maybe use arpeggio?


For Would You Stay, I like the vocal harmony. Good effort there. Somehow, I feel the singer is not very in beat with the rest of the band. Maybe can stand nearer to the drummer at the start and try to be in sync by fashionably banging his head.

 

[underaged]

your comments are greatly appreciated. Thxs!