OM: williamyeow [Pls give some comments]

[williamyeow]

hey all,

just recorded this thingy... still in the trial and error stage... so hope u all dont mind the mistake... ehhe

http://s8.yousendit.com/d.aspx?id=2ZEFFVHL70AHC0G902M949MOWH

 

[ficiante]

ok ok job but i cant feel it. maybe not much melody.
I tink u need to work on your phrasing