lemme see.
The lead guitar sounds slightly out of tune with the rhythm guitar from start till 0:12, the first 4 notes of the repeated phrase.. Its either the hi E or B string and its probably intonation, consider sending the guitar to malcom to strobe intonate it.
The tone reminds me of an 80s recording (guess thats what you want) which has a sort of "lo-fi" quality to it. Sounds very smooth and nice, but you might have problems cutting thru or sounding articulate when doing recordings with multiple leads/rhythm guitars going on, or even in a live situation with a 2nd guitarist.
Otherwise, playing is fine.