the music is nice. but its hard to put the singing inside the song...but it sounds abit like young zhang xue you (jackie chan)? hehe...but the bridge and chorus sounds nice and fits in the music well...but the front...i think maybe its alil' too low for you? but there is groove and feel in this song . i think its low for you coz it sounds like you are trying too hard to hit the low notes? i am not saying like i can sing well but...yup its still nice the song arrangement and everything *thumbs up* for a chinese jazz attempt
"The dumb waiter" is nice. At first, I wanted to say, "Use a female voice for the vocal, someone that have a cute voice." After listening a few times, i think the male voice is ok also. Just need some work on the singing.
Is the singer playing the guitar at the same time? Cause i feel he is looking at the fretboard and singing at the same time. :lol: