OM : Original song... Dreams

[azlan]

hey guys... here's another original..... just another acoustic set.... was just messing woth the guitar and came up with this mealody..... i think it needs alot more work.... what'd ya guys think.... comments more than welcome! thanks....

http://www.savefile.com/files/8008335

 

[EvilGtr]

ok this is what i think personally.... very refreshing nd relaxing feeling it gives me, some of the root notes of certain chords sounded a little wrong at the intro tho, and during the verse part u may wanna add a bass root note to it to make it sound "fuller"

 

[hifi_killer]

very soothing.. i like it.
You sound like a nice guy