OM: Nature Call

[Mr_KeyboardMan]

An attempt of making ethnic feel kind of music ... gonna add orchestration soon

done up using my psr 2100

Comments please

http://music.bands411.com/jonathansaiman/music/nature_call.mp3

 

[teraslasch]

nice! soothing flutes but a bit too exaggurated.. a flute is not a keyboard :lol: .. other than that not bad, sounds like some town theme song in game soundtracks.. i love it ..

 

[ChanMin]

sounded pretty cool.

you could space out the flute notes abit .... give it a more relaxed feel.


btw natures call is a funny name..
thats like pee-ing right?

 

[rockito]

the flute track is too 'near' and a bit loud IMO. but overall nice music.

 

[LuZeR]

Nice tune, i definitely liked it.....but maybe you might wanna play down the 'attack' of the flute in certain places....Make the 'attack' more gradual....it sounds too piercing...

just my feelings... :wink:

 

[Mr_KeyboardMan]

btw natures call is a funny name
thats like pee-ing right?

Ha ha ha thanks ChanMin for pointing that out ... now that i think about it :lol: ... must change name

This is only a rough recording done in 15 min only so i need feedback on what can be improved ...

I m using the phrasing of Sundanese traditional phrasing and mixed with new age kinda feel so it's kinda experimental ... so it's kinda confusing to orchestrate and compose asian ethnics kinda feel ... therefore need opinion.

Thanks for the comments ... anything else that can be pointed out

 

[teraslasch]

btw natures call is a funny name
thats like pee-ing right?

Ha ha ha thanks ChanMin for pointing that out ... now that i think about it :lol: ... must change name

This is only a rough recording done in 15 min only so i need feedback on what can be improved ...

I m using the phrasing of Sundanese traditional phrasing and mixed with new age kinda feel so it's kinda experimental ... so it's kinda confusing to orchestrate and compose asian ethnics kinda feel ... therefore need opinion.

Thanks for the comments ... anything else that can be pointed out

you should not orchestrate it, it should remain this way, giving it a special feel .. thats what i feel at least..

 

[jeremyrozario]

nice, really nice, the flute is ok wad, except the starting part a bit sharp and loud lar, besides that very nice

 

[Mr_KeyboardMan]

This is just a rough experiment ... havent mixed yet ... so many commented on the flute ... how bout the guitars?

hmm ... maybe it ll be better if i do another version of it to make it neater (a bit messy) instead of an orchestration