I dunno what song is being covered... haha... but well, here are my comments...
Hmmmm... I think your guitar is either out of tune or your intonation is out.
The first note is sharp... then from then on, your bends at 0:03-0:04 are sharp. But as the song goes on, as you play on other strings and on lower notes, the tuning is pretty okay... so its prob just intonation, or a string or 2.
Other than that... harmony parts are fine but rather soft!
At 0:25, the bend is slightly sharp...
Towards the end, the backing guitars sounded funny, like its not in sync with the lead..
Man, I think you were really excited abt covering this song.... check your bends and tuning/intonation, then give it a 2nd shot... I know you can do much better.
