NOt bad but my suggestion is try to mix a "Chinese Pentatonic Melodies" and Pop/Rock/Alternative.. to make songs im pretty sure that would be great..try to kill off "too much technical" on beats.. make it simpler yet melodic.. those are qualities people out there been looking forward to hear from Pop/ALternative groups! e.g listen to song entitled Gravity by Embrace.. its has super dooper boring monotonous beat BUT the melody is a killer...
ah.. i juz love them.. haha.. ispiring man.. got one of e album kero kero or something.. yes. i always show off tt i got that album anyway i love that song "Awaken" .. very lgf style