OM: Last Man Standing

sweet. love industrial. been trying to incorporate some of that in my own stuff but failed miserably. haha. my only comment is maybe the vocals could be less muddy. thash abt it. love the layering and fx created. sounds like a lot of work u put into this. thanks for sharing!
 
Sorry if this is a little late, but here's the lyrics:

I
Used to feel
That whatever I want
Isn't worth its appeal
And I
Used to hide
In the depth of the black
That I call my own mind
And I
Used to scream
At the top of my lungs
Wanna wake from a dream
Now I
Wanna heal
From the shit that took away
The sense that I am real

I
Take control
Of the life that I had
When I used to be told
What to do
What to say
It's a high cost to live
Here's the price you should pay
And you
Tried to hide
From the fact that you fucked
Up my thoughts all inside
Now I
Wanna spill
All the senses you have
Make you know how it feels


Chorus:
Bring on the massacre
Of Bonnie and Clyde
Four men of apocalypse
On horses they ride
12 apostles
Of Nazarene blood
Or a thousand Hell's Angels
With inferno in their guts
You can bring on Napoleon
Or Joan of Arc
Bring on the lions
Or hungry sharks
You can bring on a battle
From a distant sun
I'll be the last man standing
By the time that I'm done
With you
 
hmmm .. the vocals sounded abit whiny..
could use a more ... manly + aggressive voice.... would give the song much greater impact.

could go for a less electronica approach .. as well. too much synths and buzzing stuff zinging around... its alittle too rammstein for my tastes

overall i liked the tune though... cool stuff

just my 2cents.
 
Well, can't do much about vocals cos vocalist already sound like that, lol. unless you gave any tips to make him sound more aggresive? The mic could be replaced though. kinda faulty hence the muddy recording.

and I like rammstein :lol:

but thank you for the comments. much appreciated :)
 
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