OM: Cryin by jeremyrozario

[jeremyrozario]

heres my third attempt at recording this song, mi bends still veri sloppy

http://www.yousendit.com/transfer.php?action=download&ufid=547B2BA04081722A

 

[dwarfstars]

what rig you using man.. anyway.. for bends.. issit the stray sounds you are getting when you are releasing the bend through the other open strings? i also have this problem.. what i try to do is press on the the string above the string you're bending and bend them as well.. haha.. dunno whether it works for you.. lol..

for the rest it's quite ok nt.

 

[jeremyrozario]

yup, the stray sounds

anw i'm juz running a yamaha pac112 ---> zoom g2.1 ---> laptop mic in

 

[satch]

hey dude,

u improved a lot man.

keep it up

 

[jeremyrozario]

you going on e 23rd?

 

[DoubleBlade]

I can't tell a difference whether it's you or JS playing

Great stuff!

 

[Scott]

actually dont need to worry so much about the stray noise.

Its a nice attempt but can definitely be better with more epxression in the phasing.

 

[dhalif]

POWERHOUSE LA YOOU!!

 

[strats]

not bad not bad. I'd prefer it with a little lesser reverb, then again it's a personal preference. good job all in all.

backing track

 

[bam]

YAMAHA PAC112 ROCKS!!!!!

 

[penta-tonic]

legato needs abit of work but hell i love the tone u got in the earlier part of the song. got a really romantic atmosphere going in my opinion. kudos.

 

[Taylorboy87]

i prefered your tone before it was switched to a much heavier distortion. I feel that you lacked feel in this song and some licks were pretty sloppy. Overall, it was alright. Just my honest opinion