OM: champion of ithaca!!

Symphony X eh? Interesting! The Odessey Album is one of their best albums IMO.

I think you are pretty spot on in your cover... but watch the vibrato, you went out of tune a couple of times.

Hmmm... and personally, i think the tone is quite bad... get a speaker sim at least ya? ;)
i think you can download some of those programs online that act as virtual speaker sims.

And some recording programs have a built in speaker sim function