need advise on tone. HELP :)

[Channie]

http://www.yousendit.com/transfer.php?action=download&ufid=0685571E5B88CBF5

 

[strats]

i find it okay. just a very loud humming

 

[psionic]

wow the song/playing really reminds me of someone here.... :lol:

 

[sofyan]

is it shredcow?

 

[strats]

:smt117 chicken?

 

[Jqiang]

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hey who's playing? it sucks.
oh oh, it's you chan, my bad.

nice attempt,
but the style is still not very distinct, if you get wad i mean.

Be a man! :twisted:

 

[killinghall]

Couldn't hear clearly as the volume kept bobbing up and down, or is it my laptop speakers that playing's tricks on me...