Hi, Please see these two original songs and tell me what you think

[JBA]

Home demo of original song, They are NOT WELL MIXED

let me know if they are worth bringing into a proper studio and recording =) thanks

Pop song - http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=vqlQEUWw2I8

Punk song - http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=TsHuVZtMYv8

 

[soft]

The pop song's melody is abit flat. The rhythm is kinda not-so-exciting also.

The punk song is better.

Both songs need stronger singer to pull it off.