help needed.lit!!

[distorted_soul]

lol its just a wannabe phase... Unless ur actually practising stuff and in a cult group or sth, i laugh at some measely attempts... I am not against satanism or whatever, but at the same time I do not take to nonsense... and i'm no god lover also... so yeah... and if i'm not wrong I know who she(the thread starter) is...

 

[guitarnub]

Mephistopheles
Your blade melting into me
Embrace the tainted scythe
Pleasure in the pain you granted me
Surrendering to your gift of torture
Fusing to be part of you
Pleased to, proud to, honored
Shelter me under your claws
Comfort me with your mis-thoughts
Your nothingness engulf me
Sing me your lullabies
My one and only
My Lord, my Master
Mephistopheles

so fierce. then suddenly got lullaby. Satan sure dont sing lullabies one.

 

[Slash04]

A fair enough attempt.

Listen to some Dissection for inspiration.


MAHAKALI!!!!!

 

[mightymouse]

aiyo guys, relac suah. he's just tryin to get a poem done.....we all go thru some kinda phase, be it now, be it later.

oh and i am a God lover. hehehe.

ilzaf: thats so true, a womans' scorn is like being in hell sia....

good luck with the poem dude!

 

[yy_fuctup]

hahas.no larr.im not really satanic larr..i just write for fun cuz my mind only got these kinda stuff to write so like no choice.can only write these kinda stuff.i too lazy believe u anything.i think i just believe in elmo better.

 

[gsonique]

 

[ilzaf]

Emo is good. but not to that extend of cutting yourself la. this and that.

ELMO!!!!!

 

[chud]

yy ur just an emo kid using a metalhead disguise.

come on man. why dont you just leap off a building? it'll be more fun that way. man aint supposed to fly, but u can die trying

 

[ilzaf]

dude go easy la.

its up to their preferences to be emo or not.
as long as they dont disturb you or anything.
its only a poem. no metalhead.

chill bro.

 

[chud]

tengah chill la ni beb!

but yy is just dumb

and dont forget to learn the songs dumbass. or else reuben gonna be pissed again

 

[yy_fuctup]

shut up faizal i mean it.haha.u're emo too.and u admitted it assssss.im not emo.im just..emo.hehs.oh yea.the songs.ahh..asswipe.U MORE EMO THAN ME!!

 

[Juno]

maybe u cn chk out the movie ghostrider once itz out in feb...
the character that nicolas cage plays hv a deal with Mephistopheles..
:wink:

 

[shredrat]

i thought yy was a girl? :twisted:

 

[reyrey]

yy?hahaha,remind me of the yy tea in the mediacorp drama 'holland v' ... :lol:

 

[yy_fuctup]

no im not a girl.im a macho man.huh?tea?wtf..

 

[ilzaf]

hahaha. holland v. ahahhaa.

 

[chud]

everybody's emo somehow. but i dont take emo pics and put them on my friendster. hahahah

 

[yy_fuctup]

diam lar..idiot.

 

[bockscar]

thats a good poem. awesome vocab

 

[sycododo]

My school's organising fieldtrip to UK for 10 days at price of $3000!
Ahh. But its only for those "upper-end" classes who take Lit or English.
pfft.

Your vocab is like, wow. You're not sec 3 yet and you've got words I've never seen before.