Criticize my Metalcore/Progressive Metal song!!

[Keitake]

Hi guys,

I am planning to release an album sometimes this year, but I need someone to criticize my overall mix first.

I made a 1 minute song to try out mixing. This song is a mix of metalcore and progressive metal.

http://soundcloud.com/fouzy-fostdecile/seigrhomus-warriors-of-azkie

Thanks!

-Kei