Ok la, bro. Since you my friend, I your friend, I comment the song ah k? :mrgreen:
Nice song leh. I like! The idea, melody all there d. I like the lyrics too. I mean, it's not something that stands out and make me want to buy your cd, cos I don't listen to this kind of stuff ah, heh. But, I like it enough to appreciate it. Reminds me of the old local school bands in the late 90s.
And I didn't realise how long this song is! Cos it doesn't sound long at all despite it's length.
Recording wise, considering that this is a demo, can forgive the slight muddiness in the overall mix, and the lack of punch on the drums, especially bass drum.
Vocalist is good. She can definitely sing. But I have a feeling that she's trying a little too hard to to put a style to her singing in "I Don't". Cos I heard your other song, "Tumble", and she sounded more natural there; she sounded how she should sound. I would suggest that she stick to her own natural style, she sound good enough already.
The lead guitar part with vocals sounds is probably the part I like the least, especially around the 7:20 min mark onwards. Rather messy, but nothing a good proper mix can't rectify.
Apart from that, nice ah. Nothing much to change. Just keep everything else.
