The guitar's tone sounds nice but I don't understand why it's a song. Lacks feel and emotion.
And who is the original composer/band etc?
If you're doing a cover, then it is good to say so. It's very rude to use someone else's song without giving proper credit. Perhaps you're young but in future please state if it is a cover version or an original song. There is no such thig as original cover. I see too much of this crap -"Original Cover" over here at Soft. Soon, we'll see "Original Cover Version" and "Original But Covered Version.
It's either an original song or a cover version. At most, if the cover version is different, one could say that it is an original interpretation. At least there is no ambiguity as to whether it is a cover or an original.
Having said that, keep up the work. Your technique sounds alright but you really need to pick songs that 'move'. This one sounds very static and way too long.
BTW, who's the original singer/band?
Cheers
RoRK