...WFN New Track Up...

[neuro182]

Hi there people,

We have finally hit the studio and recorded our first single (demo) entitled "Your Own Lie".

Have a listen @ http://www.myspace.com/wfnsg

Drop me some feedback/comment (pls make it constructive and not flammable) in order for us to improve as a band.

Best regards,
Gerald

 

[Colarndo]

The vocalist sounds flat at certain parts.
At 1.05 the lead guitar part is distracting and conflicting with the vocals.
At 02:30 the back up vocals sound muddy and indistinct. Like someone mumbling to himself.

 

[neuro182]

Aite... Point taken Will put these feedbacks into the remixing of the song..

 

[daryl]

"Our songs speak of the cyclical degeneration of mankind in this pressing time and challenge all individuals to stand up for what is right instead of the usual conformation to the current trend."

honestly, i think your write-up conflicts with the song. you guys sound like every other band out there.. and i suppose the songwriting could be worked on, the vocal melody on the verse is very very dull. but on the whole i guess its an ok song

 

[neuro182]

ah daryl, allow me to explain... what i meant by conformation to the trend is not in terms of the music we play its in the behaviour & lifestyle of 1 person and has absolutely no link with the music genre we are into.

give an example - nowadays pre-marital is very rampant, but does it mean that when everyone around u is doing, it is correct? well, our society has been desensitized into conforming to social values that our moral values have been so badly corrupted. so our songs may sound just like any other band's songs, but the meaning behind the songs - i hope u do try to understand the lyrics and where we are coming from.

thanks for the first real feedback about the song after your initial debate about the band's genre. now back to the song, i have told my vocals about what u said and rest assured we will take note of the precious comments/feedbacks and will improve on the song over time.

thanks once again for taking time off to leave a note for us. we really appreciate that.

 

[daryl]

i see, sorry for assuming. yeah some parts of the song are not bad but some other parts seem like they are put there just to flesh out the piece and i feel that its ruining the song

 

[neuro182]

maybe u can tell me the timing where it is ruining the song so i can have a listen myself and see if we can make some changes to make it sound better...

 

[daryl]

not exactly ruining but its like the weak parts of the song. the verse, 39 secs till 1 min. ah basically i find the verses very weak melodically, the chorus is ok but if im not wrong the singer is flat in some places

 

[neuro182]

Yeah... We will take note of it... Thanks for helping us out with the music...