hey
I agree with everyone, you need to be tighter with ur structures and all your guys playing too. its on time but theres a sense of 'out of time too'. dunno how to explain. I also agree with the brass section too. maybe your keyboardist cud have added it with her sound patches or something. haha.
hmm...if you guys are tight with money and you want quality recordings for ur demo or whatever then if ur interested, drop me an email. i'll will reply with my charges etc. plus it'll give you a chance to tighten up ur performances in the recording, plus make it sound as if it was live recording and not dubbing.
cheers, keep it up.