Studio Recording: Wanna Be Loved

KhaiHan

The song definitely got potential. Hope that you will get the whole arrangement out soon.

As for the singing, need a little more defination. Currently, there is like no 'life' in the singing.
 
Whole arrangement? Erm... Not quite sure what you're referring to.

Well, bout the singing, i'll try to do more. But lol that's like the 'soul' and the feeling bout being lonely that i'm trying to convey. But yeah, i think that i can do better.

Thanks soft! =)

P.S.
Some friends of mine wanted me to send this song over radio in time for Valentine's Day. Anyone got contacts?
 
MUch better voice control than the previous 'home version' but it was expected, from a studio recording. Dude, one doesn't really need to hear you in a studio recording to know that there is something decent about you. I hope it didn't cost you too much to get this done because it's really unnecessary, except for a few special songs or ones that you've worked out well enough to warrant the expense.

Like I said b4, concentrate on LEARNING songwriting and improving your guitar playing. Add some finger-style/plucking to your routine. Give yourself time to develop further instead of rushing in. I see decent potential in your song-writing abilities more than anything else. And the song-writing will improve with more cerebral lyrics, better guitar-playing (more variation), better vocal control and look to increasing your range - even if you have to raise your voice (that'll help to allow for variation into your singing) and listening to others AS much as playing, at this stage of your development.

Cheers
RoRK
 
I just want to say one thing:

He didn't have to come up with a single cent for the recording.
 
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