Sad melody in e min improvisation

[firdaus]

Hi guys this is my version of the improvisation in e min.Please do provide constructive feedback I think the problem with my playing is that there is no strong melody in it haha anyway,.....

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=_YfQjLf4QFc

Ok guys now its your turn, young and old please do join the fun

Second version http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=QXmcViF7tNU

Both taken on the same day

 

[Evil Nathaniel]

maybe you played too fast... doesn't sound like sad melody to me.

have a look, this sound like sad melody: http://www.youtube.com/user/blunty9520290?feature=mhum#p/u/5/VAWW6JjUJWE

 

[jackmann]

LOL,,

U are running all the way, u must have the imagination of that chords progression time value. if possible u may stay and bend one note at 4 counts. speeding all the way where u wanna go baby? anyone chase u ? lol. anyway that good.
just apply lively art of playing ..GOOD LUCK WOOT WOOT XOXOXO CHEERS

www.youtube.com/humblepie780

 

[firdaus]

hi to evil nathiel the title of the backing track in youtube is sad melody in e min its not that i want it to have a sad feeling while soloing over it but anyway thanks guys for the constructive feed back

 

[jackmann]

LMAO.. U guys funny. that's enjoyment.

www.youtube.com/humblepie780

WOOT WOOT XOXOXO CHEERS.....HAGD.

 

[Likui]

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=sRKg8FYtnaA
my version sorry i not very good cannot shred like u all also got play wrong note
For me I just think of a melody and play that melody out that's how i improvise.

 

[bf0502tr]

^ nice!! who cares abt the missed notes!! urs had alot of dynamics!! which i think is rare in distortion inclined guitarists nowadays

 

[Likui]

^ nice!! who cares abt the missed notes!! urs had alot of dynamics!! which i think is rare in distortion inclined guitarists nowadays

I envy ppl who can shred and shred and shred non stop T_T why can't i do that haiz

 

[bf0502tr]

errr alot of times its like planned shredding i guess?? so its not like totally improvised.

 

[Likui]

errr alot of times its like planned shredding i guess?? so its not like totally improvised.

u sure meh, lol they all cheater ah haha

 

[drumsolo86]

Put more emphasis on single, two notes instead of playing a whole bunch of notes. Firdaus, make your notes sing out - you tried making single notes ring out like BB King/Gary Moore does? I'm no guitar-player but I've listened to lots of records - you try working in a different direction. Put A LOT of emphasis on single ringing out notes and bending into the sound.

I think you gotta work into a different direction to get that breakthrough!

 

[firdaus]

Mr jimmy thank u for the feedback,will try to work on that but sometimes my finger just want to run hehe........