reelbigsize

[honeystars]

yo check out my songs and drop me a comment.
bedroom writing,recording so sorry for poor quality.

www.myspace.com/reelbigsize

 

[ParkertR]

hi bro~ had a listen to Party on Rough good ideas you have. I've got a few suggestions - get more feel into the vocals and pronounce the words clearly. Keep the timing of the song consistent as well look forward to hear more!

 

[honeystars]

hey thanks man. will work on it. anyway new songs up=) check it out

 

[ParkertR]

Heya bro, you got the vocals a little better this time, but you've gotta practice more so that you don't eat up your words. You won't realize it yourself (happens to me as well), but try to articulate your words clearly. Here's a suggestion - get your friends to listen and see if they can hear the lyrics clearly. If they can, you've got it, if they can't, you know where to improve

Try various chord progressions as well instead of having them all similar, it'll add variation to your music and keep people interested in listening

cheers!