Honestly, that was good!! But can be better!
Brtherl, I think you're the one what sounded like talking and mumbling while singing even after taking your SLS or is it ERP singing lesson. Too much theory doesn't prove anything. The end product is what important. You can have the best theory in the world but if you don't sound good...you don't sound good. Accept it.
Chenglehung: For you, I would say keep it up as you have potentials!!
Ankh