I had mixed feelings about it .. some parts sounded very nice and very musical, but other parts sounded dull and there were a few pitching problems. So it sounds to me like you know how to make your voice sound good and sing in tune, but have trouble maintaining that for the whole song. The parts where you jumped up to the higher notes (0:48 - 1:00) in particular sounded nice.
Are the low notes near the start too low for you? Your voice almost disappeared on those notes ..
If you can, please increase the volume of future recordings (called "normalization"), so we don't have to turn the speakers up
got some tunes there,
sound your jaws are not open enough causing the sound to be strain
try some more expose song, like ah mei to . try remenber to concentare on the tech first b4 going into feeling part