Original Instrumental - "Asleep on a Flying Carpet"

[greentea23]

An instrumental piece I wrote that started slow like a lullaby but went a little exotic.

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Io-YbcpxULk

Comments and feedback are welcome, here or on youtube.

Thanks.

An experimenter,
CT

 

[Yusri]

nice melody there =)
i wished u could make it more 'dramatic' at some parts cos i could not figure out
the 'climax' part. if u know wat i mean. anw, just my opinion and i may be wrong =)
overall the melodies really caught my attention =_+ Y