Original by Yumetori - Lian Ai Qian Zou 恋爱前奏

[aralefu]

Hello

Yumetori recently made a radio debut on 938Live The Living Room, where their first R&B original 恋爱前奏 was released.
Please have a listen and do let us know your comments:

http://soundcloud.com/arielfoo/lian-ai-qian-zou

http://www.facebook.com/Yumetori

 

[parablue74]

Everything is panned so heavy on the left.. rhythm pianos should be pan 45 degrees right instead.
High octave pianos should play pan movements, so gives it a scattering feeling.
Tempo is kinda too slow..should be slightly faster..
Bass pan should be center.. not 30 degrees left..
Snare should be pan 15 degrees right..
These is no volume/pan movements, which shouldn't be the case.. during piano solo, piano should go upfront..
Vocals are not loud enough..
At ending, piano and vocals are simply fighting against one another..

PS: No offence to sound engineer, it could simply be the artist budget for the production..

 

[soft]

Killer piano playing. The song melody is nice. Style is good.

I would like to have a higher pitch snare. More percussion to add flavor to the stereo sounding.

 

[aralefu]

Thanks for the comments We're still producing our album and appreciate your tips!

Ariel