Firstly, wierd choices of chords, it somehow seems wierd or wrong to me..
the chords don't really flow well, i suggest you work out a good chord progression before moving on ..
Secondly, your left hand very repetitive, and there are a few mistakes here and there only your melody (you may wana practice more before recording)..
Overall, better than your other pieces, continue to work hard 8) ...
man I can't believe you actually knew it I made mistakes cause all the while I thought I had it covered. I just continued to play even though deep down in my heart I was like "crap , I made a mistake" and just moved on.
Basically I was trying to change my usual style of playing as I was just sick and tired of taking the easy way out by playing in octaves